Target

The movie hush is very similar to my movie. Hush targeted a mature but young audience. It mainly was distributed through social media websites such as Instagram. This site has an average user age of 18 through 25. This represents that they are trying to get the younger audience by also providing the movie for free on Netflix. Most teenagers watch horror movies on Netflix, so this was an excellent targeting of an audience to make sure the movie becomes successful.

revison 3

For my last revision i will try to add some filters and tweak the colors. The reason ia m doing this is because i want the footage to look more authentic and like a Hollywood production and not just a school project. I will also see if i can create the lighting in some areas and make the titles brighter as well as adding credit for the music i was using for the short.

Revison 2

For my second change of the movie will be editing the clips. Early on there is a pov clip in the movie from the antagonists point of view i did this to establish the pov shots early on but the cut seems rather sloppy and unnecessary. For this reason i am going  edit it out and smooth out the clip depending on what looks better i ill also try to see where i could cut some time out.

Revision 1

My first revision is going to be correcting the sound. The music in the background seems very quiet and can not properly be heard unless wearing headphones or high volume. Then after the intense section of the intruder moving up the stairs the volume seems very loud so i would lower the volume around that area to make it more balanced.  I also want the music going back up after the victim gets grabbed do to the after black screen so  people know its not over yet.

Feedback

The feedback for my movie was very well received. It noted a lot of  great things about the movie. It also showed me that people didn't like the shaky camera.My changes to the movie from now on are going to be siting my music and changing my fauns and color for credits.Other then these things listed there where no negatives on my compliment sandwich. I personally might add some filters to my movie to make it seem more cinematic and maybe tweek the music in the beginning of the movie.The target audience for this is teenagers or even adults if this was a feature length film it would most likely be rated R. The reason for this is because i like to make the movie as realistic as possible and for that i would need no artistic barrier.

Use of Conventions

This movie uses conventions such as a thriller vibe.This is due to that the movie is aimed at people who like horror movies and serous movies. We used a timed schedule during the shoot and we used a shot list. The shot list is a very vital and underrated part. The reason the shot list is so vital is due to the cause of  time management you don't sit at a action scene running around seeing what angle you like instead you just peek at your list and imagine it. I used a shaky cam do to unavailability of a camera stabilizer.

Story board